An interesting presentation that includes research into the background of the film. The focus for this deconstruction should be the form of an opening sequence and how this film employs the conventions; you have not identified the symbolism or construction of the titles. This will be a key part of your own construction so I want you to have researched at least two model texts before you finalise the plan for your own. Some comments in this presentation are less polished than in your first, although the analysis of shot types is comprehensive. Montage editing is an established technique that should not be described as 'not much editing'. Level 3
An interesting presentation that includes research into the background of the film. The focus for this deconstruction should be the form of an opening sequence and how this film employs the conventions; you have not identified the symbolism or construction of the titles. This will be a key part of your own construction so I want you to have researched at least two model texts before you finalise the plan for your own. Some comments in this presentation are less polished than in your first, although the analysis of shot types is comprehensive. Montage editing is an established technique that should not be described as 'not much editing'. Level 3
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